All Comments on '"A Coffee Moment..."'

by Ancient117331

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lovely

So lovely and full of melancholy. Those pensive moments we all have. Tormenting our souls a little.

todski28todski28almost 4 years ago
this is pretty good

but I think the "and" repeated so often broke this piece a little for me,

I believe you captured a decent slice of a moment, but pruning some ands would lift it higher I think

thanks for the read

wannabepsychologywannabepsychologyalmost 4 years ago
This

This breaks me every time I read it.

Be well friend. You are missed.

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Sigh, People tend to assume more often than not - sad, because they do it based on themselves and not on the other. My writes are me... If you want a clue - they are there to see. When you DO take the time to read and hear my thoughts behind your eyes... perhaps I won't see...