All Comments on 'a coiled spiral (agile monkeys)'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Sounds like life in the office.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
looking back.

Everything is deja vu or a flashback. What is wanted is some face to face time...

Senna JawaSenna Jawaalmost 17 years agoAuthor
simple but not easy?

Thank you, LeBroz & duddle.

Perhaps this simpple poem is not easy to grasp for many readers. The poem is about the attempt to understand yourself, to face yourself, face to face. One tries to look back, to retrace his/her own steps, and succeeds only in stepping on his/her own tail. One can't even tell for sure which of the past events were real and which were imagined or illusions (flashbacks versus deja vu-s).

Best regards,

Senna Jawa

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
MONKEYS IN THE TREES

being pursued for capture, TK U MLJ LV NV

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