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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Such a garden you grow,

especially this flower;

I had one once,

in my own little garden.

So skillfully she moved

with thorns well hid;

she stroked so smooth,

especially the id.

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Bravo Huni

An excellent start to a new

serious Art! I loved this piece,

I know I gush lol but this poem

is certainly worthy of it.

Can't wait for more.

Keep em coming hun ~

~JC

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
lump

trouser leg lump!!!!

omg that is so funny!

I love trouser leg lumps.

especially in setting them free.

seattle rain

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
that last verse would

sure make most gardens grow..heee heee..good work..smilin...blue

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
tramp definitely....

in full swing here.....love it.......nicely done......don

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
IMAGE MANIA!

sorry i've been away for a while....

love this new one!

"Street lamps brightness, her illumination

in a concrete jungle of gold and secretion

rubber and pavement smells of money

as a new lover comes to savor her honey."

gold and secretion rubber and payment...such wonderful play with imagery!

awesome job buddy!

love ya!

T

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