All Comments on 'A Good Day'

Sick! But even I in my sugar-coated world can appreciate this and its ironic twist. Well done. Made me chuckle in a sick kinda way.

We have hawks that like the tree in our back yard.

Though they dine on frogs here.

Nice flow and imaging.

somwtimes it is better to rush these pieces through if you want the pounce of the ending to work ,too much pacing gives away your ending, if you had maybe cut the whole second stanza I think it would have given a more abrupt ending to this, but as trix said you imagery was clear and concise, a 4 from mr