All Comments on 'A Long Night'

Nice imagery of being sent over the edge. This would work better by breaking it into strophes (5, perhaps) and using some punctuation: periods, commas, & semicolons.

always fun

and what can I say when someone finds the G-spot and knows what they are doing...(yummy x 10)

Oh my, that was profoundly beautiful. I think that such wide range of emotions could be showcased with so few words. I also would like to create poetry like that but I'm not sure if I'm that talented. Maybe you could drop by it soon, as I may post stuff there before I do them here. I bet you could teach me a thing or two about sensual writing!