by Sapphos Sister
Congrats on the 'greenie' for this absolutely comedic piece of eroticism. It is classic Americana burlesque in style.
Your poem was mentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotica poetry forum.
Witty, sensual and real. Poetry at its best. Thank you so much. Congratulations on the well-deserved E.
Creative, clever, fresh! Although lighthearted and playful, I don't think you are getting enough credit for the beauty in this piece. You've taken a word I've always found vulgar and somehow turned it soft with your visual approach and have given your reader a most enjoyable read! ~JaneAusten
The poem is excellent and deserving of the award. Most of all, however, I'm pleased at the effort to rescue the word "cunt" from the cesspool of bigoted imaginations.<br><br>
While cunt has persisted in the English language since before Chaucer, the equivalent word for the male organ in plain English (i.e. not from Latin, Greek, French or any of the other language borrowings that pervade English) has completely disappeared. At the end of your poem I imagined "cock" and sensed the same sensual magic in the mouth mouthing: "cock ‘n cunt." Great fun until I realized that the English word that was originally used alongside "cunt" was, in fact, "yard" and not "cock." <br><br>
Interesting to think that "cock" is a euphemism for "yard."
Many years ago, a very old lady, once declared on a British radio show, "Cunt is the most beautiful word in the english language". I tend to agree, especially when uttered by a sexy woman!
It's odd how the naming of parts can be such a crucial affair. I think you captured the moment perfectly. Except I would have decked the guy for not playing fair. You know... tit-for-tat? Nicely done.