All Comments on 'A Natural History'

by JCSTREET

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sandspikesandspikealmost 20 years ago
can you wait for the sweat of summer

This is a cool little poem. It's got sex, holidays,

and spring, I love it.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
cute and original

Love the poem and now I'm trying to picture you as a groundhog. :)

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Original...

...is indeed the right word! And this poet displays his typically smooth writing style, as always..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
This is

non erotic? ;) I think not. Well done, enjoyed the play on holidays.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
So simple....

...but the picture painted is crystal clear. I agree - it should be listed as erotic.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Now here's the poem I'll remember

Come next Groundhog Day!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
fun.

Ground hog ~ smound hog ~ someone's about to get lucky here! *grins* Witty!

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