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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
fun.

Ground hog ~ smound hog ~ someone's about to get lucky here! *grins* Witty!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Now here's the poem I'll remember

Come next Groundhog Day!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
So simple....

...but the picture painted is crystal clear. I agree - it should be listed as erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
This is

non erotic? ;) I think not. Well done, enjoyed the play on holidays.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Original...

...is indeed the right word! And this poet displays his typically smooth writing style, as always..

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
cute and original

Love the poem and now I'm trying to picture you as a groundhog. :)

sandspikesandspikealmost 20 years ago
can you wait for the sweat of summer

This is a cool little poem. It's got sex, holidays,

and spring, I love it.

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