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All Comments on 'A Penis and Pussy Villanelle'

by WillOtheWisp

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Use this as a template, "The penis and the pussy

set off in a pea green boat"....try for something lighter, your poem is too dense

AlinaXAlinaXover 7 years ago

I do love a villanelle.

legerdemerlegerdemerover 7 years ago
Enjoyed it muchly!

I like the contrast between the playfulness, near-schoolgirl ditty, and the carnality - beautifully woven together in the villanelle form. It was recommended in the PF&D thread - thanks, AH, for pointing us here, to enjoy the penis and the pussy.

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