All Comments on 'A Penitence of Burning'

This seems to real, it sounds (no pun intended) as if it was based on a real experience.

as though this was indeed a real experience.

I love the many aspects of BDSM. I can't fathom ginger in such a sensitive place though. Yikes, perhaps a little too much pain for me... lol.

What I enjoyed was your relation of how you felt. You gave thought and consideration to your words and the poem for the most part flowed very nicely.

I would say this made me feel like it was written with heart & soul, which always seems to pull the readers own ornate feels out.

Nice job! 5