All Comments on 'A Storm is Coming'

Actually, this stanza interests me:

My eyes grip you

Lightening flashes

We count together slowly

1… 2… 3...

and the thunder is heard in your heart

As a reader, I'd like more to be done with this. I think there's a poem here in just this one idea--two lovers counting after each lightning flash.

It touches someplace inside that not many words can.:)

Strong and vivid images make this a very evocative piece. Well done!

The imagery is stunning.