All Comments on 'A View to Start the Morning'

Nice imagery and I like the way you put the picture within the picture by having us watch you make the drawing. Hope we see more from you.

Welcome to Lit poetry. This is a good poem, but could be even better with a little tightening and pruning. In particular You might want to rethink, or even eliminate, the final line. If the poem is just for "him" it is a nice touch, but (IMO) it weakens the work for an uninvolved reader.

Nice imagery drawn in words.

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