by Willow Rain
Let your homecoming be quiet and restful ~ Sleep - then awaken refreshed.
I can't really say just what it is that makes your poem stand out. But it is marked! It is ribboned! Marvelously cloying! I feel a kind of warmth and soul in those words and their finite structure. I measure a blessing in those elegant phrases and Stanzas! Absolutely tremendous!
was that of a knight home from battle but then realized that the descriptions could easily be a metaphor for a businessman coming home, briefcase in hand. Wonderful imagry.
Dreamy, sweet, and so poignant. You pull
us into your restful love, and make the sandman
slumber in his wake ... Great imagery and write.
Thinking I shall have to read more and more
of your poetry. * smiles.
Asking myself, what man could resist this kind
of love. Just so real, caring aww sheezz..
ya get the point, love this one gurl ~
More and more please~ grins*