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this is a bunch better than that other bondage poem, 'though you slipped into some sinkholes of cliches i.e. 'thighs on fire.' And 'devine' is an acceptable deviation, whereas 'deva' is another form of 'diva' and 'divine' all share a common root. Not to be a dick, but it seems you can write a poem, you just have to dig a little deeper and not accept the first stream of con. word pairing that pops in yer head when writing.

if you have nothing nice to say dick head say.....nothing