All Comments on 'Achanaich'

I liked this a lot. I probably would've taken out the last "that", but it's yours, and just my opinion. Thank you for sharing. I hope to do the same soon. :)

Ohhhh, you are good; and Gaelic no less!

not sure what you meant by "granite eyes", but the other word painting was masterly!

the thought you lead

others to, nothing short

about it ...

this was AWESOME..

and powerful !

-sGp-

A superb poem. It has so much feeling in so few words...awesome

Let me see through granite eyes ~ that life's meaning may be more clear.