by TwoWorldsTX
Pride gets in the way more time than not..... Interesting read, I believe you have a misspelled word in line 6..... Thanks for sharing...
first four lines, very good Consider line break here
shudder involuntarily
as lips trail from warm feet subservient
consider change
compromising positiong. to
my position compromised
last four lines say and do what you want
5ed
Pithy, precise and eminently recommendable - well done. S.O.