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MagnetronMagnetronover 9 years ago

Looks like your 2nd to last line got auto corrected big time.

I'm guessing it was supposed to be,

"That would be really nice, see cause now I'm all confused, don't know if your feeling the same way or just being you."

The final last statement comes off as a contradiction - you go from wanting validation regarding how she feels about you because you can't tell from her behavior and yet you endcap the poem with "appearance isn't everything".

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Hi my loves, I'm currently working on a few stories so here is the breakdown: Daddy's Little Switch: African-American romance with bdsm themes The Seven: Anila - Interracial, Sci-fi Futa :-) The Seven: Secret Spinoff #1: Futa on everyone :-) The Seven: Secret Spinoff #2: Lesb...