by MagicaPractica
Well written, well read, one of the best erotic poems that I have heard on this site! Also the audio quality is excellent!
I don't understand why anyone would want to try to improve on your contribution. It says it all just as it is
A little tightening here and there could make it great!
example;
Would it be too blunt
If I asked you to lick my cunt
After dinner tonight?
could be tightend to:
Would it be too blunt
to say, "please lick my cunt"
After dinner tonight?
write on!