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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Could tighten up a bit to make this tale more dramatic;

Done right, the end could have a powerful uplift to it

With glowing expressions of hope.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
time.

A fractured spirit ~ only time can heal.

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