All Comments on 'advocatus diaboli'

I was immediately drwan in to this poem, the growl resonated, but then lost it's strength with the increased explicit-ness (hmm) of the poem. I would have liked it better if some of the middle were missing. my humble opinion please don't write a poem about this comment heheheeeee!

The poem moves along in strong short phrasing.

images created in few words.

The poem stands graphically on its own.

I would only ask to see one word changed.

Perfect imagery. Truth intact.

Takes guts to own up...LOL