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Ashesh9over 6 years agoCharmscale :
It ain't trash , it's a famous Hindi/Urdu Ghazal from tye superhit Dushman sung by Kishore Kumar and picturized on Rajesh
Khanna!!!
erectus123over 6 years agoDear Sir-- with respect
in support of Mr. Ashesh, I do think under the United Nation's charter, a person has the right to comment in what ever language they chose. It remain our task to decipher it.
charmscaleover 6 years agoAuthor@Ashesh9
If you are going to comment on a poem, could you do so in the language it is written in, please? Seriously, if you are going talk trash about me, do it in such a way that I know what you said.
Ashesh9over 6 years agoGhazal : tum likhogey???
Tumhara kaam nahin
kisi se ki muhabbat
kisi se bewafai
Rubaiyya ho ya Radha
tumhari daman mein phool hain kum
aur kaatey hain zyaada
wada tera wada
wada tera wada ....????
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