All Comments on 'After Dinner'

You both created a scrumptious, mouth-watering poem.

very sensous, tasty, erotic....

poem has been mentioned in fridays reviews

...makes me think about grabbing the whipped cream and some Hershey's syrup and going upstairs to wake up the wife...

Just gotta love whipped cream ;-)

I had to come back to this to see what we did and hot damn that is good! I can't believe that I wrote those lines! Where was my head at? I think your av just brings out the worst in me. LOL It is really good stuff!

That sure is a tempting, tasty dessert.

(er)! Great visuals, thank for the taste! :)

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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