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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Nice alliteration but it needs more. It's not showing/telling me much. The last line has a really good sound to it.

illustr8rrrillustr8rrrover 15 years ago
Simply Sweet

I can truly appreciate the writer`s intent here.

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