All Comments on 'Again Some Day'

A man with a heart and a work ethic is a beautiful thing. The poem is pretty good, for what it is, the rhyme works, doesn't feel too forced.

I have been reading your poetry, comment when I have time. I see a really good poet in you learning, growing and someday, it will burst right out!

best wishes, keep on writing :)

NJ

thanks for the read (~_~)

A tale well told; the rhyming works though it seems the rhythm sometimes falters {a small point here}.