All Comments on 'All out of love'

by bernieblue1

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Here's one of those one pop wonders,

Dropped all his writing on Lit one day then is heard from no more;

From a quick run through, can see this could use some tweaking {let's differentiate bare from bear -- naked from can't stand it}.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Tired.

In the race of love ~ exhaustion has crept in.

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