All Comments on 'All the Blame'

Like this one, I could feel the beat, was nodding my head in time with it.

L2 switch the parts "can't let go of defeat, loyal only to deceit. --wish I could remember how to read music so I could express how I'm hearing it. Ok. Last 4 words I hear as more pounding, no real pause between them, but emphasis on each word.

L3 blood darkens the water across the Nile

L4 drop The

L5 I suffer the pain, to see who I am -- again I hear the words after the comma as all emphasized, screamed in fact.

L13 I hear "mourning" 3 times.

L15 trod on instead of stood above, eh maybe?

L16 cast instead of thrown

L17 should that be "by the "righteous"?

L18 awkward, don't have a great handle on this line. Maybe, "flames consuming blameless souls"

L20 mindsets fail the blind shall prevail?

That's what I got. Hope some of it helps.