All Comments on 'All the Girls Want'

I love this, Corinna. One can almost taste the fecundity of young women near to bursting with their desires. The specification of apple and clover honey is vivid, sweet, and quite arousing in its suggestions.

the others were a little rough.

but this seems, somehow, incomplete. I'm not sure, after reading the poem, what complete thought you're trying to make.<p>

And I know that makes me sound like 10th grade teacher. Sorry.

I think it's just you, Tzara. :) But tenth-grade teachers are more specific in their critiques, so you're safe on that front.