All Comments on 'All the Layers of Yous'

This is a very deep and powerful detailed poem of life's layers which i loved. Keep up the amazing writing my sweet friend. The pain, emotion, and the salvation in this sweet poem is realistic. Besitos mami para siempre.... Felatia Allday

perhaps a bit to long winded but some nice lines, i.e.

and it was then I knew that my heart was alone,

turned stone,

and skipped off waves of pain,

now crashing down my barrier,

brick by brick.