All Comments on 'Alone'

At least you are consistent and use no punctuation of any kind at all,

And your rhyme is good.

The meter could use some work.

Amen to that, YDD.

This carries the lack of punctuation to new heights with not only no commas or periods, but no apostrophes for the contractions or possessives! Detracts from the piece's good elements.

I wonder where you are ~ everyone surrounds me but the one I need.