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Kaliwitchover 15 years agoBeautiful
I really enjoyed this, how many times has one walked by a woman with the shadowed lost look? If only someone stopped to just say a few words, how would her world have changed?
Thank you for this! Beautiful!
Kat
Anonymousabout 15 years agoDon't trust spellcheck!
Vane turns in the wind. Vain is the word you needed. Otherwise, very good.
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