All Comments on 'Always Hungry'

Seemed more a parody than a true attempt at poetry that being said you had me smiling the whole way through.

I think it's the sing song Dr suess style rhythm of the write.

I fixed for the laugh. However if humour was unintended I apologies, that is just how it read to me.

Some of my poems have been very serious as of late. I wanted to swing to the other extreme; this was just a romp.

...The most delicious lines were,

'Smother me in sauce so sweet,

marinade my aching meat,'

Well done on dipping your toe on the lighter side.

Hon, I must acknowledge your influence here. The poem is indeed Honey stylie.