by AlwaysHungry
Hon, I must acknowledge your influence here. The poem is indeed Honey stylie.
...The most delicious lines were,
'Smother me in sauce so sweet,
marinade my aching meat,'
Well done on dipping your toe on the lighter side.
Some of my poems have been very serious as of late. I wanted to swing to the other extreme; this was just a romp.
Seemed more a parody than a true attempt at poetry that being said you had me smiling the whole way through.
I think it's the sing song Dr suess style rhythm of the write.
I fixed for the laugh. However if humour was unintended I apologies, that is just how it read to me.