All Comments on 'an amnesia poem'

at least that's the star

that I wish upon

despite looking like a cliched ending, i feel that reducing it to a resigned figure of speech works in context.

what doesn't work is the excessive rhyme of read/said/bead...

i feel it carries it too far into triteness. A hesitant 5

I gave it five and I am recommending it. I do agree with the star thing at the end. Good to hear from you Sean.