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please, please learn about meter and syllables before submitting anything more. There are plenty on the forum that will point you in the right direction

The poem has a very stunted rhythm. It is all over the place. It is that way because you are forcing the rhymes into place. As a result the poem does not flow at all which greatly detracts from the reader's ability to enjoy the poem. You should spend some time reading out loud some poems by well known poets. You may get a better sense of meter and rhythm from doing so. It also might be a good idea to lay off the rhymes for awhile. Rhyming can be a difficult task to accomplish for a new poet. Concentrate on other elements of poetry first.