All Comments on 'An Unwarranted Attack'

This one is humorous and light-hearted, but could use a lot of polishing, in my opinion. Still, I find the underlying talent very exciting. *smile*

it would have been terrific, being serious in the beginning (thinking that it was something else) but quickly turning very comical. As a poem the format was a bit of a problem, for me anyway. I've read some of your other fine work and I'm sure you can improve on this one.

i don't like spiders either, but you must have had one hellified experience. you actually did an "ode" to the death of an insect. and managed to be thoroughly entertaining in verse while so doing. i had me a good laugh.....but seriously, you're shaming women folk everywhere. pick up that spray can and get busy girl.....that's your house. that spider does not pay rent, or mortgage. when either of his eight legs can scrawl a signature on the deed, then he'll be deserving of this ode.

until then arm yourself with many rolled up publications of any kind, and a spray can. i don't care if it's a can of your favorite hairspray or Lysol.your objective is elimination.....by any means necessary!!! get crackin'.....do us proud!