All Comments on 'And Talk Very, Very Dirty'

unfortunately, I think there's a mistake in this line that rather detracted from the overall success of the poem: Drag your lips across your hips - the second 'your' should be a 'my,' I'd wager.

Thank you for pointing this out to me legerdemer. Because it's a short poem, I merely typed it out again and then proof read what I expected to see, instead of what was really there.

There's no "edit" functionality here either to correct such errors. Vexing.