All Comments on 'And the Rain Played It’s Own Melody'

I have heard that melody.

Know what? I liked this poem, it is straight forward, honest, a cute story. I see a lot of promise in your style as well.

keep up the good work :)

maria

It just carries the reader along in the most delightful way. You really should submit this for publication in a children's poetry anthology. Fix the typo (its, not it's) in the title and it's near perfect! Recommended in today's new poems reviews.

It was playful and I liked the idea of the battle and the dialog between the wind and the rain. As far as the music composition image, I might have added more instruments.

this poem flows nicely, and I like the first person portrayal of the rain