All Comments on 'Apostles of Her Gnostic Truth'

by Du Lac

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Mystique~

very well written, wow Du, that was awesome

this is a shining example of erotic poetry at

it's best. Really! The word play and visuals

were spectacular. Thanks for the wonderfully

'HOT' read. <grinin'>

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
you mentioned Lilith?

you got me right away. I love this *religious * poetry, anything to make a person think. I love to watch how you have grown so much so fast, keep it up!!

sacksackover 19 years ago
You have managed...

to successfully integrate erotic elements into this poem without degrading it to "soft porn." Bravo!

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