by Du Lac
very well written, wow Du, that was awesome
this is a shining example of erotic poetry at
it's best. Really! The word play and visuals
were spectacular. Thanks for the wonderfully
'HOT' read. <grinin'>
you got me right away. I love this *religious * poetry, anything to make a person think. I love to watch how you have grown so much so fast, keep it up!!
to successfully integrate erotic elements into this poem without degrading it to "soft porn." Bravo!