All Comments on 'Aquatic Fury ~ liquid zen'

but wanting a tighter piece. It offers so much! I like the feel and the message but some cropping could help a lot. Good job my Spirit Siblings.

~Syn

with beauty of alliteration and images to delight all..thanks...blue

GREAT!! VERY ZEN with the working togather the words and lovey thoughts. This poem is WONDERFULL!!!

Yet, it's a good effort. I can tell you both put a lot of work into this piece. Nice. :)

thank you all! Art and I are learning to work together and this is our first project. I would love to hear any suggestions on help...this is the first of a series we are working on together ty all

du~

This is an outstanding joint collaboration.

I too agree with Syn.Looks and feels as if a lot of thought and effort went into this

As you have invited comment I suggest doing something to reduce all the 'ing words.A change of tense might sharpen focus a little.

Picture is pretty but the poem doesn't need it

love the art work and loved watching as this came to life

you 2 done a great job.

love,

nin-

love the art work and loved watching as this came to life

you 2 done a great job.

love,

nin-

The Art Work breathtaking as a pair of gossamer wings ~ lovely and delicate in the mornings mist. A raindrop on a branch illustration is the perfect accompanying picture.

words plays havoc with the refractive index

A mystical aura surrounds and a liquid drop of water with an entire world seemingly contained therein.

A mystical aura surrounds and a liquid drop of water with an entire world seemingly contained therein.

while soft h20 leaves no film. TK U MLJ LV NV