All Comments on 'Architecture'

by odette-odile

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Welcome to Lit and well done.

Read your 3 submissions today;

in Eden with arching eyebrows,

with Reminders the Bay windows smile,

and here with stone made to fly ~

are you building a temple here

in words of love

and lust

eternal...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Welcome!

Three good poems trumpet your arrival in Lit.

"An orgasmic flight of steps

An undulating window seat

A pouty facade

The protruding lower lip of the windowsill"

is wonderful imagery!

Tess

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