- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Artiste
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Click hereShe presses
eye to camera
brush to canvas
pen to paper
herself
constrained and contained
yet
wild and sweet
She grows
- COMMENTS
MyNecroticSnailabout 17 years agoI like the rhythm of these words -
constrained and contained (space)
yet(space)
wild and sweet(space_
(space)
(space)
She grows--
except for the last space
WickedEveabout 17 years agoClean. Not a messy, wordy poem. Some poems are so sloppy that I can't read them. I'm afraid I'll catch something nasty in their messiness.
Lovely, simple, tidy poem.
wildsweetoneabout 17 years agoI have mentioned your poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum.
Normally I would not comment here also, but want to say, thank you for your mentoring and friendship. I appreciate you, always.
wildsweetone
champagne1982about 17 years agogrows indeed. Thanks fishy one. You remind us that poems come from the heart but that the heart of the art is best presented in a well-crafted work.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoNicely done..... "Artiste" in America is usually known as a skilled public performer or entertainer, especially a singer or dancer. But in France a reborrowing of 'artist' after the sense of artist had become so limited toward the visual arts and especially painting. Hence, the title may be misleading.
