- Erotic Poetry
- Neverland
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Click here(4 Syllable Rhythmic Poem)
It's you, I dreamed,
Two days, it seemed.
Undressed, you came,
Without a shame.
To Neverland,
We charged unplanned.
Our fantasies,
They'll never cease.
Instead, fulfilled,
We sure got thrilled.
And even if,
We jumped off cliffs.
I still didn't fear,
Since you were here.
With our hands latched,
And our hearts, snatched,
We strode the land,
Without demands.
Courage I took,
Undid my hook.
All left, removed.
You stared, didn't move.
My hair, let down,
You looked, I drowned.
You pulled my hand,
To you, I land.
Locked in your arms,
No one can harm.
We stared then kissed,
Oh such a bliss!
In this leisure,
We found pleasure.
We never stopped,
Till we both popped.
Harder, we grind.
Juices combined.
Sweaty, sticky,
Not a quickie.
Our bodies tired,
For what transpired.
Mind's sedated,
Both elated.
We cuddled more,
To deep slumber.
We cared the less,
Our nakedness.
Let the land see,
That we're both free!
Until I woke...
Found all's a joke.
It's just a dream...
That's what it seemed.
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- COMMENTS
daweiabout 5 years agoI really enjoyed the pace and the intimacy of the poem. One of my favorite poems that I've read here.
CucumberLemonadeabout 5 years agoAuthorIndeed, that is the twist. Thank you! Lovely day!
-CL
CucumberLemonadeabout 5 years agoAuthorThank you dear for appreciating it. You have a lovely day!
-CL
CucumberLemonadeabout 5 years agoAuthorReminds of The Hamlet.
'To sleep, perchance to dream'
Beautiful lines. Indeed. Thanks Taaz.
-CL
CucumberLemonadeabout 5 years agoAuthorThank you once again for reading my work, Mr Taans.
I loved the erotic scenes based on my real dream and challenged myself to create a piece with a specific syllable count per line.
I was actually torn in disclosing that it was a dream onset. Upon creation, I loved that the lines in the middle made me forget the initial disclosure, yet, I needed to claim that it still was a dream at the end.
If you were caught and forgot about it at one second, then I guess I was successful.
I appreciate your comment and feedback. Have a lovely one ahead, Mr Taans!
-CL
