All Comments on 'As Only You Can See Me'

An excellent piece

of poetry. Seeing

someone for the person

they really are, who they

are to you starting from

the inside.

I Loved it.

Thank you.

~ J

like Louis McNiece.

Hey!

Evelyn

I enjoyed the essence of this work. There is a soft desire that burns in the rhetoric. Emotional qualities of this work could be brought forth more with a breaking into stanzas. Pause, reflection... and then a jump into the next line. Visually it needs the breaks... to see the hidden sighs within the breath of the poem.

mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews

du lac~

Her plea and warning, all in the same breath, "Allow me to be me." Don't try to change her, accept her for who she is.

a worthy love making technique ~ making love with the eyes.