All Comments on 'As We Left'

by Curiouswife

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LiarLiarover 16 years ago
Very nice

"for a man’s footsteps

to pound out from a boy,

grasp hands behind my back,

catch the spirit heartily."

I do hope you're aware of on how many different levels this is an excellent set of lines. Prosody, rhythm and choice of style changing to reflect every new image, and still, a seamless read.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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So well done, leaving it to the mind of the reader to complete an excellent drawing.

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