All Comments on 'atlas'

Only one word to describe this: brilliant

Extremely well crafted with simple but effective imagery. I loved that second stanza and that ending was superb.

Deserves a 10

p.s your poem has been mentioned on todays reviews

Vampiredust

Senna Jawa. I enjoyed this very much.

for the last three lines, no other grabbers, more like gab

signed

MNS

maybe

but remember you said I shouldn't exist