All Comments on 'bare flame'

just an excellent poem, insightful

my favorite lines---

suns are mothers

incestuous eons away

yeah, thats good :)

my words always look like chicken scratch every time I read one of your poems. It is hard to comment. The first four lines are magic. The rest is the pedastal upon which magic stands.

Mothers enlighten our path to understanding.

except when uncontrolled. TK U MLJ LV NV