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except when uncontrolled. TK U MLJ LV NV

Mothers enlighten our path to understanding.

my words always look like chicken scratch every time I read one of your poems. It is hard to comment. The first four lines are magic. The rest is the pedastal upon which magic stands.

just an excellent poem, insightful

my favorite lines---

suns are mothers

incestuous eons away

yeah, thats good :)