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by LeopoldNicholas

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
great interweavin' of real life traumas

iton the poem !!

Maria2394Maria2394over 10 years ago
too bad we cannot vote!

I enjoyed your poem. I would lose the word "small" in the stanza about your problems, but enjoyed the read.

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