All Comments on 'Beelzebubbles: Tarablackwood22'

This just sucks.

Obviously no effort or thought.

Like a dog whimpering to be let out.

Answers one of my questions: did anybody ever get a zero around here?

IMHO, I'm not sure it's a poem. Reads like a statement.

Feeding off of criticism should have left you with more substance than this.

seriously...

your first efforts were fun and good snappy poetry

this reads like a badly written forum debate post

but with more line breaks

what's your point?

nuff said already, i'll save my time for something worth commenting on!

Hey back off Tara mister, I am trying to draw your fire away from my buds, cant you tell

over here over here little monster,here, here!

I got a mirror here for you on the ground... you can watch yourself take a poo right on it!

What? No self-attacking criticism from Beelzebubbles' anonymous alter-ego on this one? Did you get enough response from others this time that you don't feel the need to play with yourself?

comes to mind. but then who'd have it?

Degenerated from fowl bitchin' to just plain boring.

Like stirring up a nest of hornets ~ somebody may get stung.

where both seem unarmed, TK U MLJ LV NV