All Comments on 'Beelzebubbles: Tarablackwood22'

where both seem unarmed, TK U MLJ LV NV

Like stirring up a nest of hornets ~ somebody may get stung.

Degenerated from fowl bitchin' to just plain boring.

comes to mind. but then who'd have it?

What? No self-attacking criticism from Beelzebubbles' anonymous alter-ego on this one? Did you get enough response from others this time that you don't feel the need to play with yourself?

Hey back off Tara mister, I am trying to draw your fire away from my buds, cant you tell

over here over here little monster,here, here!

I got a mirror here for you on the ground... you can watch yourself take a poo right on it!

nuff said already, i'll save my time for something worth commenting on!

seriously...

your first efforts were fun and good snappy poetry

this reads like a badly written forum debate post

but with more line breaks

what's your point?

Feeding off of criticism should have left you with more substance than this.

IMHO, I'm not sure it's a poem. Reads like a statement.

Answers one of my questions: did anybody ever get a zero around here?

This just sucks.

Obviously no effort or thought.

Like a dog whimpering to be let out.